摘要：背了一堆英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作模板，可是照搬模板得不到高分，該怎么辦？這時(shí)候，你要學(xué)會(huì)一些變換的技巧，讓你的作文不再是模板的復(fù)制粘貼，寫(xiě)作三大高分技巧，分享給你。 　　?簡(jiǎn)潔才是美 　　?例一 　　【原】It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. 　　【改】It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. 　　?例二 　　【原】It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and everyone of the Chinese people 　　【改】Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese. 　　?例三 　　【原】This book will help you master the basic elements of good writing. 　　【改】This book will help you master the basics of good writing. 　　?例四 　　【原】The search of the forest that they conducted was entirely complete. 　　【改】The search of the forest was complete. 　　?例五 　　【原】Whenever anyone telephoned her to ask her for help with their homework she always obliged right away. 　　【改】She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework. 　　?句式變化 　　?例 　　【原】Lu Hao graduated last summer. He joined the First Auto Works in Changchun soon after graduation. He received an engineering degree from his college. 采用從句能將這三簡(jiǎn)單句以不同方式連接起來(lái)。 　　【改1】After graduating last summer with an engineering degree, Lu Hao soon joined the First Auto Works in Changchun.(介詞結(jié)構(gòu)+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)) 　　【改2】An engineering degree-holder, Lu Hao joined the First Auto Works in Changchun last summer soon after graduation.(同位語(yǔ)+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+狀語(yǔ)) 　　【改3】Having graduated with an engineering degree, Lu Hao joined the First Auto Works in Changchun last summer.(狀語(yǔ)+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)） 　　?換種說(shuō)法 　　TIP：不要使用一串串短的、支離破碎的句子。要理清自己的思路，盡量使句子長(zhǎng)度有所變化。 　　?例一 　　【原】The Art of Strategy was written by Sun Tzu’s. It is a fifty-six-hundred-word Chineseclassical work. The writer put forth a set of principles in a very tightly compressed manner. They deal with how to defeat oppositions and win battles. 　　這種表達(dá)的問(wèn)題在于： 　　(1)簡(jiǎn)單的“主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu)太多； 　　(2)"written"和"writer","TheArtofStrategy"和"It"，"setofprinciples"和"they"為重復(fù)用語(yǔ)； 　　(3)讀起來(lái)很單調(diào)。 　　【改】In his fifty-six-hundred word classic, The Art of Strategy, Sun Tzu put forth a tightly compressed set of principles for achieving triumph over opposition. 　　介詞結(jié)構(gòu)+同位語(yǔ)+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)的形式比較好，因?yàn)閷?quot;SunTzu"放到了最重要成分-主語(yǔ)的位置，其他成分按邏輯排序居次要地位。整句子很流暢。 　　?例二 　　【原】Proverbs are short sayings. They are drawn from long experience. 　　【改】Proverbs are short sayings drawn from long experience. 　　?例三 　　【原】People change and places change as well. Jennifer felt this strongly. She had been away for eleven years. 　　【改】On returning after an eleven-year absence, Jennifer had a strong feeling of how people and places change. 　　?例四 　　【原】Beijing streets are crowded with taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent. The number has been rising rapidly in the last few years. The latest statistics show there are now 1.2 million vehicles in Beijing alone. 　　【改】Taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent have crammed Beijing streets in rising numbers in the last few years 1.2 million vehicles at last count. 　　?例五 　　【原】Moby Dick is a book. It is a long book.It is about a whale.A man named Ahab tries to kill it. Her man Melville wrote it. 　　【改】Her man Melville wrote a long book called Moby Dick. It is the story of a struggle of a man against a whale. 　　唯有多寫(xiě)多練，方能掌握更多的變化，同一意思，n表達(dá)方法，適當(dāng)結(jié)合，就能形成一篇好的作文，18考研加油！ 　　【小編說(shuō)】覺(jué)得文章內(nèi)容不錯(cuò)的話(huà)，記得點(diǎn)一下右下角收藏哦~你的收藏是對(duì)我們最大的鼓勵(lì)！